One Wish (en anglais)

[darkheart]

My arms are bleeding, bleeding just to forget everything, or maybe to forget myself
I feel tired
I think I'm losing this war
I don't need to fight because
I'm not strong anymore to continue to fight

One wish
Not to exist
Trying to find myself
Trying to find who I am
but at the end I don't care anymore
You're going to take me away
Pushing me to the edge and waiting for my ruin

You're the poison inside of me and you're destroying me every day a little bit more
The damages are deep and painful

Looking again and again at the mirror but I only see that thing you want me to be!
A thing that should never exist and that should be me!

I hate what I see
I hate what I am
I hate what you have done with me!

One wish,
To ignore it, ignore the pain, and maybe ignore my existence
You make me feel guily
Make me understand that my biggest mistake is to exist
Because of you I'm nothing
And nothing was and will never be anything!

I tried to shout, shout for help, but you're keeping my mouth closed
Nobody should hear me!

My arms are still bleeding and you are proud of your act

One wish
to be somewhere else and somebody else

Trying to leave you
But you always catch me back

Hoping the next cut will be the last one or maybe the final one
The final one which will take me away of the pain

One wish
That one of us wins this confrontation

Who will be the winner?


(désolée mon anglais est pas des plus super mais je bosse dessus)

[Atavhystérie]

Trop cliché. Syntaxe simpliste. L'anglais c'est dur. Lis-tu de la poésie anglaise ? Familiarises-toi davantage avec la langue avant d'écrire. Il manque une âme à ton poème et l'anglais ne le rend que plus ridicule. Voudrais voir ce que tu écris en français avant de te saquer vraiment .

[ataraxiana]

@Atavhystérie, tu l'as déjà saqué. Dire ce que l'on pense, oui, mais on peut y mettre les formes...

[Atavhystérie]

Ah, je peux faire pire, je trouve que j'ai été directe mais pas méchante. L'hypocrisie ne fait pas avancer. Surtout lorsqu'il s'agit d'écrire, peindre...

Mais tes réflexions MPise-les moi plutôt. On floode.

[darkheart]

certe certe mais il y a des facons plus élegante de le dire non? LOL

[Atavhystérie]

J'avoue, excuse-moi. J'ai du mal à enrober . Je ne voulais pas être méchante.

[darkheart]

allé n'y pensons plus